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Wow! When I tell you this you are going to love whats coming in the future. The first thing is a car. The second is a new bart train. The last is a battle ship for the military.
Okay this car is so cool that it will blow you out your mind. The car is real small so it goes fast and since its small it doesn’t have to take a lot of gas. In the front it has two wheels that shift right and left. But one bad thing is that it will cost a lot since its small for less gas and fast. Everything that’s fast costs a lot of money.
You know how we have dirty bart cars well in the future the bart will have an automatic cleaner like if the bart car gets dirty it will clean it in 2.5 seconds. It can get a lot of people in it so you don’t have to get on something with some body you don’t know but anybody could get on that you don’t know and just sit right by you. Some people take up space in every transportation.
Finally the battle ship. It has enough space for a lot of people can get in it for back up. It has good amory and can go faster than others so it can get away faster. Not bullet proof so can get shit in the tank and blow up. Can get shot but might not blow up.